Ethnic Fiction—Professor Murabito
4/2/15
A story I am writing for my ethnic fiction class. Enjoy!
The
Black Death and The Vegetable of Life
The town of Cork in Ireland was mostly comprised
of poor farmers and low-class workers who were illiterate and went starving
half of the time.
It was April, and the sun was shining
brightly. Cullen put on his brown leather shoes and stepped outside in the
warm, Summer-like air. The morning birds chirped in the nearby trees, and one
flew over the potato field that Cullen was walking toward. He kneeled and
inspected one of the potatoes. His hand cupped what appeared to be a black
potato. When he held it up, it crumbled into black mush. “Huh?” Cullen
exclaimed as the black mush crumpled out of his hand. “I’ve never seen that
before…” he said as he stooped to look at another nearby potato. “This one is
black, too,” he observed, picking it up. He gave a gentle squeeze, and it
turned into a wet, black mush. “Is this like a disease? There’s no way these are
edible without getting sick.” He dropped the mush and wiped what remained on
his hand against his worn pants.
Cullen stood up and walked around quickly,
observing as many potatoes as he could. He felt a sudden sense of urgency. The
next potato he saw was black. And another one. And another one. He was
counting, then estimating. There were still groups of brown potatoes, not
tainted by the black. But there were more black then brown. “Oh no…” he
muttered, feeling shock go throughout his body. “This isn’t good. Pa is gonna
be upset. We are gonna go hungry by the looks of it.”
Cullen ran back to the mud cabin. Outside, a
basket-shaped orifice acted as a chimney. The window had broken panes stuffed
with a wisp of straw. And there were rags that were filthy and nasty around the
unfitting door and acted as outside walls. He opened the wooden door which had
a hole at the bottom. The pig must have broken it. Inside, the walls were tottering,
crumbling mud. He saw a chicken on top of his Pa who was sleeping on tattered
rags. When Cullen neared the chicken it fluttered its wings and jumped off. He
kneeled and shook Pa. “Pa, wake up!”
His Pa grunted and grumbled. “Cullen, what
is it?” he asked.
“The potatoes,” Cullen said. “Something
happened to our potatoes!”
Pa sat up and opened his green eyes. “What?
That can’t be…” he tried standing up then grunted.
“Pa, let me help,” Cullen said, placing his
Pa’s arm over his shoulder as his Pa stood. “Your ankle is still swollen from
falling.”
“Show me,” Pa said.
Cullen led Pa out the door as he limped
along. “They are black,” Cullen said. “And mushy. Look.” He reached down and
grabbed a pile of black mush and showed him.
“My…” Pa said. “I’ve never seen anything
like it. This is unheard of.” He took a piece of the black mush from Cullen and
rubbed his fingers against it. Then he looked around their potato patch. “They
aren’t even potatoes anymore… they’re just… mush.” He dropped the mush and as
he started to tilt over, Cullen supported him by placing his shoulder under his
arm again. “It’s like an… evil plague befell upon the potatoes.”
“It would appear so, Pa,” Cullen said.
Pa said, “It reminds me of the old stories
about the Black Death. Except it’s the potatoes and not the humans this time.”
“Yes, they are black and dead,” Cullen said.
“I wonder if this has happened to other people’s potatoes or just ours?”
“Go find out for us, Cullen. I am in no
condition for travel. I will stay and attend to things here once I wake up more
and salvage any potatoes I can.”
Cullen led Pa back to the mud cabin. “Yes,
rest a bit.”
Pa sat down on the dirty rags. The chicken
fluttered toward the doorway but Cullen gently kicked it. The chicken bawked as
it retreated back inside.
“Just be careful,” Pa said. “I don’t know if
what plagues the potatoes can harm us too. Wash your hands in the river and don’t
touch your face.”
“I will, Pa,” Cullen said. “Be back soon,”
he said as he shut the wooden door. He ran to the dirt path toward the river up
ahead. What is going on? Cullen
wondered.
When he got to the river, Cullen kneeled,
placing his black hands in the cold water, and began rubbing his hands
together, getting rid of all the black dirt and mush. He then washed his face. What if the water is tainted too? he wondered.
Would it be safe to drink? Are other
foods or crops affected? There were so many questions popping up in his
head.
Cullen stood and jogged toward the Clachans,
the small communal cluster. He admired the rolling green hills of the
countryside as he made his way toward one of the well-known farms in the
community.
Can't wait to read the rest of this. Nice plot development, without dragging. The conflict was obvious and, in return, where you left off formed an affective cliffhanger. Some sentences are a little rough but it is a working draft do I'm sure you'll fix that. :) nice job.
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